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Mary Rosenblum
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This is our Professional
Connection live interview with Michael Arnzen, poet and horror writer.
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Michael Arnzen's latest books
include 100 Jolts: Shockingly Short Stories www.rawdogscreaming.com
and Gorelets: Unpleasant Poems www.fairwoodpress.com
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A tenth anniversary edition of
his Stoker Award-winning novel, Grave Markings www.deliriumbooks.com/essentials.htm
was recently published in hardcover by Delirium Books . He teaches in the
Master's degree program in Writing Popular Fiction at Seton Hill University, just
outside of Pittsburgh, PA. If you'd like a taste of his work, visit his website,
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His online newsletter, The Goreletter,
won this year's Bram Stoker Award for Best Alternative Form. You can also
take a look at the newsletter at: http://gorelets.com/cgi-bin/mojo/mojo.cgi?f=list&l=goreletter
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Last time Michael visited us,
we talked about poetry and horror and how they related to each other
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but tonight's chat fits in
nicely with what we have been doing on the website this week, in the Forum.
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We're going to talk about Fast
Fiction.
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Michael, welcome! Great to have
you back!
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Michael Arnzen
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Greetings everyone. Happy to
be here again!
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Mary Rosenblum
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Do you want to start out by
sort of defining 'Fast Fiction' for us? Do you mean short
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or written fast, or both?
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Michael Arnzen
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Heh. I guess it often IS both,
but I usually just mean "short" when
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I think of "flash"
fiction (or fast fic, quick-fic, sudden fiction, etc.)
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And there are degrees of
"short," too.
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Mary Rosenblum
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What are the subgenres...so to
speak...of short?
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Michael Arnzen
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Well, everyone (including
editors) thinks of it differently, so it's a bit moot
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but I think of stories under
1500 words as "flash fiction" and
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stories under 250 words as
"microfiction"
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but no matter which form we're
talking about, it still has to be fiction:
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that is, be narrative -- a
story -- with a beginning, middle, and end.
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Mary Rosenblum
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This is a very applicable topic
for students at Long Ridge, since the early assignments have 1000 word
limits...and a lot of students
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complain that they can't DO a
beginning, middle, and end in 1000 words. What do you see
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as the real key to a short short
story?
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Michael Arnzen
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Change. I think something significant
has to change -- usually in the character -- from beginning to end.
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Often that
"beginning" (or origin of the conflict) can be unspoken,
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and often the ending (the
resolution of the conflict/problem), too, can be implied (off screen)
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but so long as either the
character or the reader's assumptions have changed during the course of the
story
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then you've got a story!
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Mary Rosenblum
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Aha...so it's a matter of
focusing on the change, and implying as much back story...or future
story... as possible?
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Michael Arnzen
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I think so, Mary. What is
implied is usually what the reader is asked to search for when they RE-read
the piece.
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But the first time through,
they want to experience a moment pregnant with meaning,
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whether an intense conflict or
a turning point in the character's life
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but sometimes flash fiction
can be something like a "joke" where the tale is bare-boned, too.
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Mary Rosenblum
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So one method, in other words,
is to have layers? A surface layer of action or drama, say, and then
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Mary
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a deeper layer that offers
clues to the larger story?
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Michael Arnzen
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I really like how you put
that: "layers." Often readers are looking for character motive,
and there isn't time for it in the usual sense, so
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it must be implied. Flash
fiction demands readers to read between the lines, like poetry.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Hmmm... this fits rather neatly
into my own feeling that fiction is a spectrum
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that runs from novel on the
long end to poetry on the 'short' end. :-)
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Although some short shorts ARE
shorter than many poems!
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Michael Arnzen
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Nice! Yes. The boundaries
between forms get blurry the more the reader is asked to concentrate on
language rather than story.
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But I truly think character
and conflict make the difference between poetry and fiction.
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Mary Rosenblum
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I think that's the best
distinction I've heard, actually. I like that.
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smeagol
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Hi. I am glad you came back to
chat with us. I only caught the last 30 minutes last time. Can you say more
about having the resolution or ending "off screen?"
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Michael Arnzen
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Hi Smeagol!
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I suppose an apt metaphor is
taking the reader to the edge of a cliff, but stopping just at the edge
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and letting them leap off
themselves, rather than taking them down with you.
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shakes his head
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Or maybe that isn't it at all.
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But I think good flash fiction
resonates at the end. It leaves you thinking about outcomes and possibly
sends you back to the start of the story again.
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Like, you don't always have to
say "and then she killed him" at the end.
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Your reader should feel that a
particular ending is inevitable (or probable). And then draw the conclusion
themselves. This isn't ALWAYS true, but often.
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pook
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Some of the short fiction in so
implied I'm not sure what is meant by the story. I always reread them.
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Michael Arnzen
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Yes, sometimes writers are too
ambiguous.
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But I admire writers who can
get me interacting in the story in a way where my anticipation is picqued.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Do you find that it annoys you
if you can imagine more than one ending?
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Michael Arnzen
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Not necessarily. Maybe it's
because I'm a creative writer, so everytime I'm reading, I'm sort of
writing.
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But I think writers are smart
to construct a tale so that there's at least one obvious "likely"
outcome
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but also at the same time
"layer in" another possibility, as we suggested before.
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Like all writing, the
storyteller has to communicate clearly, I think, to at least meet the needs
of an average reader. ...
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But also layer meanings into
the story where it invites rereading and rediscovery of other meanings.
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In other words,
"subtext," I suppose.
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Mary Rosenblum
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That's where I find myself
admiring talent...when I read a story that will work for a casual and
average reader and yet challenge a more skilled reader.
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Michael Arnzen
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Yes, and as writers we are
always training readers on one level to become more skilled.
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smeagol
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The ending should definitely tie
things up, no? I mean it shouldn't leave the reader trying to figure out
what the story means, should it? My writer's group is analyzing a short short
right now and we are shaking our heads asking ourselves "now what the
heck was that?!?"
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Michael Arnzen
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That's true. A conflict should
be resolved. But again, the "final outcome" might be more complex
than the simple resolution or tied ending.
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Good fiction can satisfy the
need for that conflict to be resolved, while maybe also opening up new
ones.
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Flash fiction seems to invite
more interpretation than longer pieces. But you're right, Smeagol, that a
story that's too
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ambiguous about things doesn't
get the job done. Again: every story needs a beginning, middle, and end.
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pook
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You can use dialogue in fast
fiction to show character and plot, right?
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Michael Arnzen
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Definitely, pook! In fact, the
skill in flash fiction becomes packing meaning into the various elements of
fiction
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so that, say, dialogue is
telling us something about character, or setting is telling us something
about the conflict.
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Everything in a short-short
should be doing double-duty, if the tale is to be succinct.
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Mary Rosenblum
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I think that's what I like
about it --
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the challenge to make every
word, in effect, do two or three or more things. It's a lot of fun.
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Michael Arnzen
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Right on, Mary. I like that
it's so tight, brief, succinct, to the point. Writing flash fiction has
really helped me master "pace" in my longer work, too because of
that.
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Mary Rosenblum
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It would...much as writing
short fiction really gave me good pacing in my novels.
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craig
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Would the Writer's Digests
Magazine short story contest be considered as flash fiction because they
require the word limit to be no more than 1500 words?
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Michael Arnzen
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Definitely, Craig. That looks
like a good contest to try!
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Do they have a specific theme
this year? I don't recall.
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Mary Rosenblum
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There really is no absolute
definition of 'fast' or 'flash' or short short is there? But usually it's
less than 1500 words?
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Michael Arnzen
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I think WD offers a good
prize. It's hard to find markets for flash fiction that pay enough.
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Agreed, Mary. There is no
absolute definition... The editorial guidelines really say it all.
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chatty lady
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Where do you look for the
markets specializing or at least publishing these short shorts?
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Michael Arnzen
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Good question, Chatty Lady!
There are a number of places that I recommend.
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But first let me say that publishing
ONLINE seems to be the largest market for flash fic,
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because people who read online
don't want to scroll a lot. So less is definitely more.
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I find that many sites listed
at ralan.com are looking for short-shorts.
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Another GREAT place to learn
about paying markets is (hold on while I look up the URL)
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FlashFictionFlash yahoo group
: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FlashFictionFlash
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It's a newsletter more than
anything, run by Pam Casto, who has written for WD on the subject.
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They list paying markets,
subscriber sales (which are clues on places that are receptive to flash),
instructional bits, contests and more!
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Of course, you could always
query an editor or try a short-short on them cold. Never know!
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Mary Rosenblum
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Storyhouse.com is a print short
short market. They print the stories on ...coffee labels! But they pay 15
cents per word so they're better than many.
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BUT they are very slow to
respond.
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Michael Arnzen
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I love the novelty of that
market. Haven't submitted to them, but I love the idea of reading a story
while I make my morning coffee. Good inspiration!
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pook
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Are you familiar with the
website poewar.com? They have a fast fiction contest weekly where people
submit 300-600 word stories with a constraint.
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This week it's the story has to
start with a smell. It might have to have each sentence longer than the
next, next week.
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Michael Arnzen
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I'm tempted to say "a lot
of them will stink" but that's just crass. I love the idea of writing
a short short about a smell. I'll look into it!
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Thanks, pook. (Curious what
smell you'd use to launch the story).
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Mary Rosenblum
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Now that one hooked me, too,
Michael!
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Michael Arnzen
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Oh, another marketing trick:
submit to places where others have published shorts. Like, if you see a
flash in a "year's best" anthology, look on the copyright page.
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Someone told me they did that
using my book, 100 Jolts, which has 100 stories in it!
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Mary Rosenblum
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Good technique, all.
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That's true. Jolts is a
dictionary right there. LOL
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Michael Arnzen
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An "obictionary"
even. :-)
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Mary Rosenblum
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There you go! :-)
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We have an editor in the
audience:
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writermom
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I am the editor for a new
section in Just For Mom online magazine I am looking for unpublished Moms
and Dads to submit their stories of 1000 words or less I am also looking
for non fiction and poetry I will take any subject just use the Just For
Mom guidelines
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writermom
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The address to send submittals
too is timeout@justformom.com editor
Chris Weigand
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Mary Rosenblum
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So there you are.
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Michael Arnzen
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Awesome.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Yes, that's rather cool!
Thanks, writermom!
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smeagol
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I work for a publisher of
poetry, but we are thinking of perhaps publishing collections of Flash
Fiction in the near future. However, another publisher in our area was
recently asking for submission of flash fiction, but didn't get very many
(at least not enough to publish a collection). Are there a lot of people
writing this right now, or is still considered a new and upcoming market?
Or perhaps a trend?
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Michael Arnzen
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I bet you'll get a lot of
humor pieces. I think flash fiction often invites humorous conclusions.
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That's a tough call, smeagol.
I don't know if it's a trend or not. Sometimes this is a matter of
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reaching the writers. Like, list
your guidelines in FlashFictionFlash newsletter and you'll get swarmed with
manuscripts.
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Mary Rosenblum
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I was also going to suggest
that the call for submissions may not have gone to the right forum.
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Michael Arnzen
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I do know that READERS
>love< flash fiction! Quick, easy reads.
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Mary Rosenblum
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I know quite a few people who
write flash fiction regularly.
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arfelin
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Alfred Hitchcock Mystery Mag's
monthly Mysterious Photo Contest asks for micro fiction (under 250 words
about the photo).
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Mary Rosenblum
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Markets are leaping out of the
walls! :-)
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Michael Arnzen
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Yeah! I love that contest in
AHMM! ...
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There is an issue here
regarding pay that I'd like to raise.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Please do.
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Michael Arnzen
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The reason many writers don't
write flash is because of the economy of publishing that pays by word.
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The market almost makes
writers write long if they want to pay the bills. But "less is
more" when it comes to a successful flash.
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Anyway, this is one of the
reasons why you don't see much flash by your favorite writers.
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And why no one makes a living
off of being exclusively a "flash fiction" writer.
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But editors seem to like the
stories -- they can fill a page, for instance -- and readers always enjoy a
quick read.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Well, this also applies to
short fiction, alas. Flash or novelette!
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If you're paying a mortgage
you're likely to do it with novels.
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Michael Arnzen
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Yes. A novel per room!
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Heh. But writing flash has
many other rewards. It trained me to be a better self-editor, for example
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Mary Rosenblum
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Yeah, about that! :-)
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arfelin
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So should flash fiction be plot
driven? Or is it more about the meaning and mood of the writer's word
choices?
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Michael Arnzen
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Good question arfelin.
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It depends on the intention of
the story. Actually, there's little room for "mood building"
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if that's all the story has,
then it's going to fail to satisfy the fiction reader -- it becomes more
like poetry (a vignette, at best).
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I'd say that flash has to be
CONFLICT driven, but not necessarily plot driven. Plots are often
super-short, or implied.
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A short-short could be the
length of ONE SCENE, for example.
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So the build up is crucial,
but can be off-screen.
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Mary Rosenblum
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And the scene that IS on screen
contains the change, right?
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Michael Arnzen
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Exactly. Or pushes the reader
to the edge of that change, so that its occurrence is inevitable and deducible.
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I'm back to the "pushing
off the cliff" metaphor again. Sorry :-)
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I did want to say again that
the "change" can simply be in the reader's viewpoint or
assumption about the story.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Well, that's not a bad
metaphor, is it? We DO force our readers over that ending cliff and
sometimes they really don't want to go there.
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Michael Arnzen
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Indeed. That last step is a
lulu.
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paja
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I don't understand what you mean
about the reader changing. Would you expand on that?
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Michael Arnzen
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Sure thing, paja.
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Let's say we don't find out
until the last line that the story is set in a Nazi concentration camp.
That can make us do a double-take and question what we had taken for
granted about the setting, etc.
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That has a "pay off"
that isn't just located in the character's change. It sets us retroactively
searching for meanings
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and wondering how the writer
"tricked" us into assuming the story was about something
different.
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Mary Rosenblum
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And rereading the story...or
rethinking it...from a totally different awareness.
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That's also a great way to make
a reader come face to face with his or her automatic assumptions.
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Michael Arnzen
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Precisely. And that makes us
question our assumptions. Yes, Mary! We think alike!
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Mary Rosenblum
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No kidding... In unison now...
:-)
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paja
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In longer work we would be sure
not to do that to a reader? But flash plays with the brain, so to speak?
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Michael Arnzen
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Well, paja, I don't mean to
suggest that all flash fiction is a "mind game" but it is permissible
in this genre
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because it provides a
satisfying sense of closure. Flash fiction often follows the structure
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of the joke, believe it or
not, even when it's not funny. You see a lot more "gimmick" or
"trick" endings in flash
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than in other genres, because
of the desire to end with a bang.
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Mary Rosenblum
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It seems to me that where we
could easily wear a reader out in a longer piece, we can ask readers of
short shorts to work harder at finding everything that is in the story.
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Michael Arnzen
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Well put, Mary. I find the
"simple" joke-like short-short stories to be unsatisfying,
usually.
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I just thought of another
source of inspiration on the web, but it isn't a >market< per se.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Oh yes?
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Michael Arnzen
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Award winning writer Bruce
Holland Rogers has a site called shortshortshort.com where subscribers
(cheap!) can get a story in e-mail every few weeks.
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He's so good at it that he
explores different approaches to the form and inspires writing the craft.
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I think subscriptions are just
$5 a year or so.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Actually, Bruce is a friend of
mine and I subscribe to his stories. He really does explore the genre...and
yes, I think it's 5 dollars per year.
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chatty lady
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I get Bruce’s stories and
they are terrific.
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Michael Arnzen
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He's a more literary sf/f
writer. My stuff is darker. But I always find myself wanting to write after
I read Bruce's shorts.
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Right on, Chatty Lady!
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Mary Rosenblum
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Yes, for those of you
interested in short shorts, here's a great course for very little money!
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paja
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Does metaphor works well in
flash?
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Michael Arnzen
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I think it does, paja, since
the form is inherently experimental, and invites more "poetic"
approaches.
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Thus, prose-poems are
perfectly acceptable to many editors who are open to flash fiction.
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One can employ an extended
metaphor -- or even an allegory -- to good effect here. If a metaphor is
too long, readers lose patience.
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So the answer is definitely
yes. But if it's TOO ambiguous or symbolic, some readers might get lost.
So long as there's a beginning middle and end...it's a story.
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paja
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Prose poems?
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Michael Arnzen
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Well, let's just say poems
without the line breaks.
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It's a tough genre to define.
One where the borders between poetry and prose get blurry.
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A prose poem is looser about
the strictures of fiction and calls attention to the WAY words are used as
much as to the storytelling.
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Mary Rosenblum
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I think they're really the
blurry meeting between poetry and story.
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Michael Arnzen
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The writer is more present in
a prose-poem than in a short story. Maybe that's the difference. The
writer's language calls attention to itself and the craftsman behind it.
Whereas in a story, the writer sort of gets out of the way !
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shayon-joseph
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Is there a "standard"
word count for prose-poetry?
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Michael Arnzen
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I don't think so, shayon-joseph...but
once a prose poem goes over a page, it starts to feel long.
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I think of them as single
paragraphs.
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joanc
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I think if you're able to write
fast fiction and do it well, it gives you the opportunity to get rid of the
clutter in your prose. Sometimes being published for less pay may be a good
start in creating an effective resume.
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Michael Arnzen
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Indeed, Joanc! I can't tell
you how much my writing -- and especially REVISING -- got better working on
100 Jolts.
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You train yourself to cut away
and cut away. And to put things succinctly. So you definitely get sharper.
And selling those pieces DOES build up a resume.
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In fact, I don't worry much
about pay for short stories. I tell myself that the pay will come when I
sell them all in a book collection later on. But you should never undersell
yourself, either.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Good advice.
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And short work DOES get you
attention from critics and the publishing world.
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Michael Arnzen
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Definitely. Especially if it's
a knock-out story! One friend of mine sold a short-short
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that has gone on to be
reprinted in "year's best" collections and several overseas
books. And it's been made into TWO short films!!!
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it's called "Echoes"
by Lawrence C. Connolly. It appeared in one of the early BORDERLANDS anthologies.
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I think it's only 1200 words.
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Mi
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http://www.lawrencecconnolly.com/
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smeagol
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Funny thing. You know that story
that I mentioned that my writer's group is analyzing (and it has left us
scratching our heads)? Turns out it was written by Bruce Holland Rogers. It
is about these two people fighting, then at the end they both jump off a
cliff and while arguing they begin to flap their arms. It turns out that
they can fly. So maybe we should take another look at that story!
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Michael Arnzen
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Sounds like that ending is
symbolic, smeagol. He's writing in the mode of fantasy or magical realism,
I think.
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Where anything goes!
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Mary Rosenblum
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Bruce does like magic realism
and does quite a bit of it.
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shayon-joseph
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Michael, do you write nonfiction
on a regular basis at all?
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Michael Arnzen
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I write it often, but not
necessarily on a regular basis, Joseph. I'm curious why you ask. Have you
seen my newsletter for writers? Or ...?
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The opening "column"
in The Goreletter is a non-fiction humor piece, too. So now that I think of
it, I do write it regularly.
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Mary Rosenblum
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For those of you who have not
checked out The Goreletter, it's an excellent newsletter.
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I recommend it. :-)
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ellenj
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How do you shorten a lengthy
story into a short story?
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Michael Arnzen
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That's a tough one to answer, ellenj,
because every story has different elements that could stand to be cut
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but generally, you cut the
adjectives and adverbs, the descriptions that aren't pertinent to the
storyline,
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while also condensing: getting
rid of passive voice, letting verbs do more work, and cutting to the chase.
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And I think I live by Elmore
Leonard's advice: to cut the boring parts that people would skip.
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Mary Rosenblum
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That's good advice generally!
Even for novels!
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Michael Arnzen
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I was thinking that sometimes
a story >shouldn't< be cut for cutting's sake. Some stories should be
longer
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particularly if the writer is
exploring a character's psychology or motives.
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Mary Rosenblum
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I have to say that I think
every story has a natural length
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and if you cut it too short,
you lose the heart of the story. Sometimes, I think you need to change the
plot or the focus in order to shorten the piece.
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janp
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Have you any comments about
short, shorts meant just to entertain--not break the brain --as the one smeagol
has been speaking of?
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Michael Arnzen
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Well, janp, that's definitely
a goal: to entertain. That can be accomplished through style (imagine a
humorous voice in a cowboy story, for example) or the use of comic action.
...
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I think entertainment has a
lot to do with meeting and breaking expectations...pushing the envelope a
little so that people expect the unexpected.
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But I write horror mostly, so
that's part of what I do.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Michael can I put you on the
spot a bit? Can I ask you to use a story that you have written
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and take us roughly through
your process of crafting it? Where you started, how you created it? Or feel
free
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to create a new one right here,
if you are so moved. :-)
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Michael Arnzen
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Hmm...this is going to be
tough in this format! Let me take a look at 100 Jolts and see what I can
come up with.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Yes, you can't really write it
out here, but even your method of roughing out a story would be
instructive, I think.
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Michael Arnzen
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Here's an example. I have a
piece in Jolts that appeared in the online zine Insolent Rudder. Here: http://www.insolentrudder.org/stories/story40.html
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It's called "In the
middle" and it's only 4 paragraphs long. Not even half a page in my
collection.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Great!
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Michael Arnzen
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If you go to that website,
you'll see the painting that inspired my story. I actually saw it in an art
museum, mused over it, and began writing!
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I broke out my palm pilot and
wrote the first draft on it. This was a student exhibit at the school where
I teach, so I was able to get the student to send his art to the magazine.
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Anyway, I was thinking about
art students, and art, and their motives, so I had a setting for the piece.
The t-shirt on the painting
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says "sex. murder. art."
So I started with that, wondering what on earth it meant.
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So I began drafting a piece
about an art student who wears that shirt.
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I wrote: "The hallway is
empty, save for one teenager who approaches me. He is large, trucker-size,
sweating. He wears a black t-shirt emblazoned with three words:"
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"Sex. Murder. Art."
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Notice how I used first
person, writing from the position of a person who is uncertain and
puzzling. Which was exactly how I was feeling as looked at the painting.
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I got the details from the
painting as far as the "teenager" goes.
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The key phrase clicked in my
head: "murder's in the middle."
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That line is very pregnant
with meaning. How does murder get "in the middle" between sex and
art?
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So I next wrote…
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"The words are stacked
with sex on top and art on the bottom. Murder's in the middle."
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I did this so the reader would
be sure to see what I was seeing in the painting and wonder about it, too.
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What follows are more clues
that raise the bar by SUGGESTING possible connections between art and sex
and murder, without really saying what it might be.
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I wrote:
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He passes me by. I know he
just left art class. I heard that today they would be exposed to their
first nude model. But it's only 11:17 -- class shouldn't be over yet. Perhaps he finished
early. His footsteps echo down the empty hall like the period after each
word. I follow him.
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I associate nude drawings with
art, so I added that. The reference to time is a suggestion that the teen
has done something wrong.
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And the final line "I
follow him" does what I was talking about before: it pushes the reader
over the edge. Why doesn't the observer just ask him? Or hold him for
questioning?
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And who IS the observer,
anyway? Student, teacher? These are the sort of questions I wanted to raise
in the reader's mind without
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closing off possible
interpretations. It's a more literary story than others in the book.
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shayon-joseph
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Good stuff.
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Mary Rosenblum
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I agree...and it does all the
things you talk about quite clearly
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leaving us thinking of possible
scenarios that might play out just beyond the edge of this story and for
me...I'll undoubtedly spend time thinking about murder in the middle of art
and sex.
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Michael Arnzen
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Thanks, Joseph! It's sort of
an "enigma" story more than anything else. One could simply think
that the teenager killed someone in an art class, but maybe there's more to
it than that.
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Anyway, if I've said anything,
it's that one can find inspiration for a story anywhere -- in a portrait
painting, for example.
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You just have to be receptive
to it...and musing.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Thanks. It's nice to see the
process in action, so to speak.
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So what advice do you have for
those who are interested in exploring flash fiction further?
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Michael Arnzen
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Read it. A whole new world of
possibilities for approaching fiction will open up to you if you read
around. I recommend books like "Sudden Fiction International" and
"Microfiction" and "Sudden Stories" -- all available on
amazon.com.
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And websites, too: I've linked
to some on my website, but here's a few I particularly like:
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vestal review, 42opus, and
minima magazine. Do web searches and they'll turn up.
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There's also a book I just
published in, called Small Bites, which is a charity anthology for Charles
Grant, available at www.shocklines.com
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And 100 Jolts, of course.
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My second piece of advice
would be to try to challenge yourself to write one a day, every morning (or
every night before you nod off to bed).
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Mary Rosenblum
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That's an excellent challenge.
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Michael Arnzen
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The more often you write it,
the better you get, obviously. But other ideas will click and you'll start
developing short shorts into longer, salable pieces.
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Mary Rosenblum
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It becomes short short practice
and an idea file...two achievements for the price of one.
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Michael Arnzen
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There's a website, even, you
can use if you're daring. I think it's called oneword.com. They have a
prompt and you have one minute to write a story.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Oh, that sounds like fun!
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What happens if you're still
writing when the buzzer goes off?
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Michael Arnzen
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The timer literally clicks
while you fill in a form! ...
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You're allowed room to
complete the story, but it does go off and interrupt your flow momentarily.
I used it a lot, but never clicked "post" when finished because I
wanted to save my electronic rights. So I'd copy and paste what I did into
my word processor instead.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Ah yes...that does bear
mentioning...the electronic rights issue.
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Published on that sort of site
is STILL published, yes?
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Michael Arnzen
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Yes. So any type of
"magazine" or other venue you submitted it to would only be
buying reprint rights. Which means less money, usually. Plus I like to give
first rights to more collectable venues, like offbeat print mags or
something. A web page where anyone can post the results of their
"challenge" is not very reputable a publication to claim on a
resume, either, despite it being "published."
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paja
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I love writing from pictures. Do
you use them often?
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Michael Arnzen
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I love using pictures, too, paja!
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I do it often, when I'm just
story-hunting (I've usually got so many things already going, that I'm
usually not actively hunting...)
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But the images suggest so much
that I feel like I >have< to write a story about them, sometimes! I
read a book called Hideous Beauties by Lance Olsen, in which every story is
inspired by a famous painting. The stories are edgy and literary, but what
a project!
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Mary Rosenblum
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What else sparks stories for
you, Michael? Music? Conversations?
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Michael Arnzen
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Oh, Mary, story ideas just pop
into my head all the time...I've trained myself to be more receptive to
them over the years, I think.
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Sometimes I'll run with a
curious line from a song lyric or poem, sometimes it'll be something my
wife told me she saw on CNN, sometimes
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it'll occur in my dreams. I
think I try to keep one "odd" idea in my mind at all times, and
then wait for something else to connect it to.
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Like, tonight I had the idea
that a flash story might withhold the idea that it was set in Nazi Germany
all along.
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Now I'll just file that in my
head and wait for the perfect premise to present itself to me that would
fit that sort of story. Don't know where it'll come from, but it'll certainly
come eventually.
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ladybird39pm
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Would the books you mentioned be
available in the library in Canada?
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Michael Arnzen
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Quite possibly, ladybird39pm!
Not sure. If you can't find a book at the library, and you're looking to save
, another option might be getting e-book versions of books.
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They're often half-price or
lower. For example, I saw that 100 Jolts is listed on amazon.com for a very
low price in e-book form. Or fictionwise.com has a number of short-shorts
by different sf/f/h authors.
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Mary Rosenblum
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www.fictionwise.com is a site
where you can download stories for a price.
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joanc
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I suffer with narcolepsy, so the
dream thing works great for me. A lot of my stories come from my dreams.
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Michael Arnzen
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Exactly. Like, for .50 cents!
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That's great, Joanc! I think
writers have to be in touch with their dreams -- or their dream state -- to
really get the reader involved.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Before we run out of time,
Michael, what projects are you working on now? Any new books due out soon?
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Michael Arnzen
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I love waking up with a great
story idea in mind. One flash fiction collection -- Cigar Box Faust, by
Michael Swanwick -- features stories he claims he even WROTE in his sleep!
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Time flies! Let's see.
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Michael Arnzen
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My next novel will be out from
Raw Dog Screaming Press in 2005. It's called PLAY DEAD
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about pathological gamblers
who play poker with cards "made" out of their murder victims.
It'll be in a really sweet "sculpture-bound" edition as well as a
hardcover edition.
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See www.rawdogscreaming.com for
details on this one.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Oh, cool and macabre idea,
Michael.
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Michael Arnzen
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I'm also looking forward to
the release of my next poetry book, Freakcidents, from Shocklines Press in
hardcover soon. They’re at Shocklines. www.shocklines.com That's a
bookstore that sells many of my books.
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